{"id":21,"date":"2018-03-05T07:27:35","date_gmt":"2018-03-05T07:27:35","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/blogs.oregonstate.edu\/bhsjournal\/?p=21"},"modified":"2018-03-05T07:27:35","modified_gmt":"2018-03-05T07:27:35","slug":"writing-exercise-11","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/dev.blogs.oregonstate.edu\/bhsjournal\/2018\/03\/05\/writing-exercise-11\/","title":{"rendered":"Writing Exercise #11"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;ve always known that I am hypercritical or my own writing style and that I find it hard to half-ass large writing assignments like the one assigned to us. This definitely confirmed that I am just as hard on other writers as well.<\/p>\n<p>To begin with, I had a hard time giving much of a review to the first paper at all, because the entirety of the draft was two vague paragraphs and an equally vague outline for the remainder, and a grand total of 3 references. Many of the questions weren&#8217;t applicable and I found myself wondering if I would lose points as well for not having much to say about this largely incomplete paper.<\/p>\n<p>The second paper, however, I had to hold myself back from tearing into bits. I tried to be as gentle as I possibly could while critiquing this piece, because it felt rude to come in as an outsider and tell a stranger how I felt about their writing. Except this piece was truly appalling. Despite it being anonymous, the author still included their name on the piece and based of the ethnic origins, I assumed English was their second language so I tried not to be overly critical of the grammar &#8212; not much they can do about that. However, the paper felt like I was reading someone&#8217;s stream of consciousness. Many topics discussed in class were dumped into the paper and I just wanted to shout &#8220;THAT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH YOUR PAPER! STOP TRYING TO DISTRACT ME!&#8221; But that seemed rude so I left that out of the peer review. It was hard to critique individual aspects of a paper that I wanted to tell the author to burn and completely rewrite.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>That sounds harsh, I&#8217;m sorry.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;ve always known that I am hypercritical or my own writing style and that I find it hard to half-ass large writing assignments like the one assigned to us. This definitely confirmed that I am just as hard on other writers as well. To begin with, I had a hard time giving much of a &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/dev.blogs.oregonstate.edu\/bhsjournal\/2018\/03\/05\/writing-exercise-11\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;Writing Exercise #11&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":8872,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-21","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/dev.blogs.oregonstate.edu\/bhsjournal\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/21","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/dev.blogs.oregonstate.edu\/bhsjournal\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/dev.blogs.oregonstate.edu\/bhsjournal\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/dev.blogs.oregonstate.edu\/bhsjournal\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/8872"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/dev.blogs.oregonstate.edu\/bhsjournal\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=21"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/dev.blogs.oregonstate.edu\/bhsjournal\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/21\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":22,"href":"https:\/\/dev.blogs.oregonstate.edu\/bhsjournal\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/21\/revisions\/22"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/dev.blogs.oregonstate.edu\/bhsjournal\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=21"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/dev.blogs.oregonstate.edu\/bhsjournal\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=21"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/dev.blogs.oregonstate.edu\/bhsjournal\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=21"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}